Neo-13's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Madness Realistic]

I know why the file is so big...

It's because you simply did trace bitmap on EVERTHING. The reason I'm giving such a low score is because none of it was your own original art, and there wasn't exactly much actual interesting animation.

You need to:
- Draw your own stuff
- Animate motion more realistically - eg don't just tween a picture to slide across the screen.

Anyways, that was pretty sucky because you didn't draw anything (well, apart from the blood), and I can't really say: "Oh, it would look so good if you did this..." because I haven't seen anything that you yourself has done.

Think about what I've just said - people won't apprieciate movies where the author has only imported pictures and gone modify>bitmap>trace bitmap.

Anyway, I hope you take into consideration what I've been saying here.

Formalz responds:

I spent alot of time doing this. Everything was edited by me.. I had to trace everything and edit it on Photoshop. Its a shame that people dont appreciate my time. I only decided to do it this way,(which actually takes longer than drawing it myself)because I wanted to stand from the common haters LIKE YOU. Drawing it would have taken me less effort, but its always better to bring people things different than the 1000's of other look alike cartoons in here, dont you think?

[Madness - Preloaded]

Fantastic

That was some really smooth animation and great killings. I loved it.
My only critisism is the blood - it was kind of pixelated and was only one shade of red. It would be better of the blood wasnt pixelated-looking and if you had a darker tone of it to go with it.

However, I still give this 10/10 and and 5.

Keep it up.

LYRONMARTIS responds:

Yes, i know what you mean... if i had more time i would animate the blood myself but that was just a sprite i turned red :)

[Prowlies at the River]

Fantastic!

Yet again, your artwork is fantastic and the story is imaginative - I would go as far as to say that your the best FBF animator NG has to offer.

[SleepEasy]

Ugh!

The voices were horrible and that was mainly tweens - <sarcastic> Very different </sarcastic>

I think that you should have done better voices as it made me cringe.

RupeeClock responds:

Mainly tweens my ass, it was a mixture.

I'm not changing the voices.

[The Myth Of Sisyphus]

Great

The artwork and animation was most pleasing.

The backgrounds and shadows etc were nice touches.

Overall, very, very good.

CatFat responds:

I'm glad you liked it:)

[Madness Consternation]

Fantastic!

You get payed for that add? ;D

[Super Hero Clock]

Very nice

One, thing. I pressed replay and the music kept on playing onto the first scene, ruining it.
You may want to put a keyframe with the end song being stopped to fix this.

[Awsoman Ep. 1]

Nice style

Interesting art style - I like it.
However there wasn't much evidence of skill in flash animation, so I can't rate this as highly as I would have done.

damolamo responds:

its my first one :(

but yeah, im glad you liked it... it would make my day if it passed...

[Negotiating w/Chinese Man]

Not Bad

That wasn't bad.
One thing I might point out is that the 'again?' button doesn't actually do anything.

[Dad's at Work]

Seriously over-rated.

It's alright, I suppose, but I really don't what all the hype is about. The animation is OK, but the artwork - the characters - are basic and un-interesting. Watch something like Paladin and you'll see how much better it is.
In fact, TRACER is so realistic and life-like with the drawings and especially the animation - it's simply incredible. So when I compae this to it, it just quite frankly is no-where near the same quality.